mttting
New member
- Joined
- Aug 26, 2011
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- Malaysia
- Current Location
- UK
Could someone check my grammar and word structure? I have to admit this is quite technical. I really hope to understand what mistake I am making as my colleagues are commenting that my English writing is not fluent/smooth. SUPER MANY Thanks.
'I created a computer model to simulate the loading distribution to a proposed retaining wall. The wall is constructed using X office’s design. It is assumed that water pressure acts to the flood gate is resisted by reinforced concrete wall at its ends. These walls are expected to subject a large overturning moment. Therefore, piles are designed to distribute at 1.5m spacing at these position which has a closer distance than an uniform 3.0m spacing. '
'I created a computer model to simulate the loading distribution to a proposed retaining wall. The wall is constructed using X office’s design. It is assumed that water pressure acts to the flood gate is resisted by reinforced concrete wall at its ends. These walls are expected to subject a large overturning moment. Therefore, piles are designed to distribute at 1.5m spacing at these position which has a closer distance than an uniform 3.0m spacing. '