Diamondsmith
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- Japanese
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I heard that the usage of nouns instead of verbs shows a more formal register, like:***** NOT A TEACHER *****
(1) The teacher has already given us an excellent answer.
(2) I only wish to give you an example of an elegant "thank you" that you
may wish to consider.
(3) Many years ago, two English brothers wrote a book on "good" English called
The King's English. Today some people say that the book is too old (1906) to be
useful; others disagree.
(4) In their preface, they write these words:
The especial thanks of the compilers are offered to Dr Bradley, joint editor
of the Oxford English Dictionary, who has been good enough to inspect the
proof-sheets, and whose many valuable suggestions have led to the removal
of some too unqualified statements, some confused exposition, and some
positive mistakes.
(5) Of course, I do not know what you wish to thank people for, but the Fowler
brothers' words show us that you might consider being specific. That is, let your
correspondents know exactly how they helped you.
(6) By the way, the Fowler brothers' use of "especial" is old-fashioned, but it
is still elegant and accurate. (That is, Dr. Bradley deserves thanks that are more
than the usual thanks.) Since the Fowler brothers were English gentlemen, they did
not use the period after Dr.
(7) Also notice their wording of "The especial thanks of the compilers [the authors]
are offered to Dr Bradley." I think that writing teachers nowadays recommend that
we use more direct language: We wish to extend especial thanks to Dr. Bradley,
who ....
(a) Nevertheless, some people still like the more formal, indirect approach used by the
Fowler brothers. You might consider this approach, for I have heard that the
Japanese language appreciates this indirect and more modest way of expression.
She was very sad when he went away ---> She showed great sorrow at his departure.
Do you have any comments about this?