Some suggestions. One other point, you have listed your name differently, once in the body of the letter and once in your closing. Use your first name first in both sections.Hi everybody, I'm an italian university student taking part to a competitive examination in order to spend six months in California.
Here's the required motivation letter, I'd appreciate If anybody could tell me what he/she thinks about it.
I am writing
youto introduce myself and to apply for the exchange program with University of xxxxx. My name is xxxxx, I'm xx years old and I'm currently completing a Bachelor's Degree in xxxx at University of xxxx. Moreover, I have just enrolled in the Master's Degree in xxxxx.
I have been living in Italy since I was a child, but I have always dreamed about living and working abroad,
meetknowing about other cultures and learning languages. I had several experiences in foreign countries:I have already been to England three times and I have been enrolled at the xxxxx School of English in xxxxx for a General English course.
I would like to take part in
thisyour program, and to study in xxxxx, because this is an excellent opportunity to improve my academic and professional skills and to gain a lot of experiencesthe experience I need to become a successful professional.
actuallyinterested in this project justonly because of the travel to and residence in another country. The mere improvement in my language skills (which will surely and successfully occur), could take place in any English speaking country. ., not really needing a specific place.
The primary reason for choosing this particular part of the world, and your University in particular, is crystal clear to me: it would enable me to develop a strong background of knowledge
onin areas still not available atin my home university. andThat would turn outresult to be invaluable throughout my career.
The United States
areis certainly the best environment for the formation ofbecoming an xxxxx, because it provides providingstate-of-the-art teaching, research, and facilities, integrating thea European approach towardsto space technology with a successful historical US-aerospace background.
asome detailed research, I got in touch withcontacted several teachers at the University of xxxxx, explaining my intent to develop a thesis for the Master's Degree with their support (in terms of knowledge and tools). I thereforefound available professors at xxxxx & xxxxx (I'll be glad to report e-mail conversations if needed).
I am able to work alone or as a part of a team, and I enjoy working with people. I
do feelam flexible and open minded, and I'mI am used to hard work and longing to embarkaccept onnew challenges.
Above all, I am eager to learn new things and I am firmly convinced that for an ambitious university student it is necessary to expand
itstheir horizon of knowledge by being able to think and work on an international level.
I enclose a survey of performances I have done during my main study.
Student or Learner