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    which

    Dear teacher,

    if you say, " I will revise the order, which will cancel item XXX and change that to YYY"....

    Is this correct grammar?

    Thank you

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    Re: which

    Quote Originally Posted by idiotmike View Post
    Dear teacher,

    if you say, " I will revise the order, which will cancel item XXX and change that to YYY"....

    Is this correct grammar?

    Thank you
    I would write it like this: "I will revise the order, cancelling item XXX and substituting it with YYY."

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    Re: which

    Thank you very much. what about my original sentence, I am just wondering if there is anything wrong with its grammar structure? Thank you.

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    Re: which

    Quote Originally Posted by idiotmike View Post
    I am just wondering if there is anything wrong with its grammar structure?
    It's fine.

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