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    WE MAKE UP LUXURIES ?????

    I JUST SET UP A COMPANY AND I AM NOT SURE IS IT SUITABLE THE SLOGAN WHICH I AM THINKING TO USE IT FOR MY COMPANY.

    THE COMPANY IS SPECIALISING IN THE EXTERIOR YACHT COATING & PAINTING WORK.
    THE PROCESS IS FIRSTLY THE COATING AND FAIRING WORK.WHEN THE SURFACE IS READY AFTER THAT FINALLY THE YACHT WILL BE PAINTED.

    THE SLOGAN WHICH I AM THINKING TO USE IS;

    WE MAKE UP LUXURIES

    IS IT SUITABLE FOR THIS KIND OF BUSINESS THIS SENTENCE?

    I LOOK FORWARD FOR REPLY FROM ANY ADVISOR.

    THANK YOU

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    Re: WE MAKE UP LUXURIES ?????

    Quote Originally Posted by uk13ir View Post
    WE MAKE UP LUXURIES

    IS IT SUITABLE FOR THIS KIND OF BUSINESS THIS SENTENCE?
    Welcome to the forum.

    Please do not compose your whole message in capital letters - it's very hard for some of us to read.

    The answer to your question is 'No'. Make up can have the idea of 'invent something untrue', so it is certainly not what you want. I do not claim to be an expert in advertising slogans, so I will leave better suggestions to others.

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    Re: WE MAKE UP LUXURIES ?????

    Quote Originally Posted by uk13ir View Post
    WE MAKE UP LUXURIES

    IS IT SUITABLE FOR THIS KIND OF BUSINESS THIS SENTENCE?

    I LOOK FORWARD FOR REPLY FROM ANY ADVISOR.

    THANK YOU
    You can say "We mean luxury!" which is akin to "We mean business".

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    Re: WE MAKE UP LUXURIES ?????

    Quote Originally Posted by fivejedjon View Post
    I do not claim to be an expert in advertising slogans...
    Oh, it cannot be that difficult. All you need to do is think different! After some time, you may even be lovin' it.

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