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    He has joined us due to our perfect history at business market.

    Hello,

    This is a sentence from my student's home assignment:

    'He has joined us due to our perfect history at business market.'

    I am not sure about 'due to'. What if I change the sentence this way:

    He has joined us because of our formidable/excellent/impressive track record in business.

    Thank you for the time and help.

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    Re: He has joined us due to our perfect history at business market.

    Quote Originally Posted by vectra View Post
    He has joined us because of our formidable/excellent/impressive track record in business.
    Much better.

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