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Thanks for your time, assistance and opinion from Dr. P H on the bases of MRI of my brother in law. Shaikh has informed us after the consultation of his family doctor whether the operation is suitable in Canada or India . I will let you know when I get the info. from Canada
 

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Thanks for your time, assistance and opinion from Dr. P H on the bases of MRI of my brother in law. Shaikh has informed us after the consultation of his family doctor whether the operation is suitable in Canada or India . I will let you know when I get the info. from Canada
It's not clear at all. Can you rewrite it?
 

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Thanks for your time, assistance and opinion from Dr. P H on the bases of MRI of my brother in law. Shaikh has informed us after the consultation of his family doctor whether the operation is suitable in Canada or India . I will let you know when I get the info. from Canada

Thank you for your time, assistance and Dr P H's opinion based on my brother-in-law's MRI scan. Shaikh will inform us, after consulting with his family doctor, whether the operation would be better done in Canada or in India. I will contact you when I get the relevant information from Canada.

See my version above. I have put in the red the most important changes but there are some others. Please read it carefully in comparison with your original.
 

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