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    Can't make this sentence work

    Greetings from a UE newbie!

    Someone asked me to review their work prior to publishing online. Maybe it's a "case of the Mondays," but for the first time in a long time, I'm actually struggling to make this sentence come out right...

    ourcompany.com or any of our employees or affiliates do not sell the products John Doe reviews or receive any compensation from manufacturers for reviewing them.

    How can this be reworded so that it is much less clumsy and more accurately conveys the message?

    Thank you VERY much!

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    Re: Can't make this sentence work

    Thanks... yes, that makes much more sense and rolls out much easier!

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