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In order to accommodate the training sessoin in the odette room on Monday, Oct.17/11 at 11:00 am I cancelled rob’s earlier booking for the Odette room and booked the basement discussion room for him.
Please help to write it correctly if there is any mistakes. I am not sure if the last part of the sentence sunds ok. Shall I say " rebooked the discussion room for him"?Thank you
Last edited by jkl; 04-Oct-2011 at 16:55.
You need a little help with capitalization and a comma. Your date format is not standard. It is unlikely that anyone will confuse which year you mean, so I would drop it completely.
In order to accommodate the training session in the Odette Room on Monday, Oct.17 at 11:00 am, I cancelled Rob’s earlier booking for the Odette Room and booked the Basement Discussion Room for him.