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    please check my Grammer Mistakes !!!!!!!!

    1- This experiment did on 5 month old child. At this age, the children start to have a since of controlling the motivation of hands and he/she try to hold up or pushing things. It is focusing on how the 10 month child can control his/her two hands.
    2- She lives with her parents and one sister.
    3- We will wait her reaction.
    4- Our seeing during the test.

    5- They allowed us to take a sample video.

    7- she closed her arms with strictly close of thump.




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    Re: please check my Grammer Mistakes !!!!!!!!

    Are you describing the results of an experiment or are these just random sentences?
    If sentence 1 concerns a completed experiment, it should be written in the past tense. Several choices of vocabulary in sentence 1 are incorrect.

    2. acceptable sentence

    3. We will wait for her reaction.

    4. not a complete sentence.

    5. acceptable sentence.

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    with strictly close of thump has no meaning in this phrase. Do you mean "she crossed her arms with..." ?

    Try again and I'll look at your answers.
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    Re: please check my Grammer Mistakes !!!!!!!!

    . . .and for future reference, Noor, note the spelling of grammar.

    It is incorrect to capitalise grammar mistakes and there's no need for an exclamation mark - let alone seven.

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    Re: please check my Grammer Mistakes !!!!!!!!

    We will wait for her reaction.
    or "We will await her reaction."

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