Punctuation in my resume

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mamen

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My dear teachers,
I have made my resume. But I don't know if all of the punctuation marks that I used are correct. Please help.

Thanks in advance.


(Please see the attached resume.)
 

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Tdol

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I have moved it and it is better to post the text rather than attaching a file as many people do not open files like this for security reasons.
 

mamen

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Here is my resume:


Cxxxxxxx, DAGUPAN CITY
E-MAIL: xxxx@xxxx.com
CONTACT NO.: +########
Objective:
To obtain a position as a secondary education Mathematics teacher in your institution to maximize my university training by sharing my learning experiences and acquired expertise in the field of mathematics.

Profile:
Dedicated to teaching with commitment to student learning and development; skilled in leading classes in interesting and interactive learning initiatives.

Educational Background:
College University of Pangasinan-Phinma, Dagupan City – 2011
Bachelor of Secondary Education, Major in Mathematics

Awards Received:
• Champion: Regional PAFTE 1 Quiz Bee during the Second Semester of AY: 2010-2011.
• One of the TOP 25 University Dean’s Listers during the First Semester of AY: 2010-2011.
• One of the TOP 25 University Dean’s Listers during the Second Semester of AY: 2009-2010.

Secondary Mangaldan National High School, Mangaldan Pangasinan – 2006

Elementary Mangaldan Central School, Magnaldan Pangasinan – 2002

Extra Curricular Activities:

Vice President – University of Pangasinan College of Education Mathematics
Students’ Organization (2010-2011)

Vice President – University of Pangasinan College of Education Mathematics
Students’ Organization (2009-2010)
Pre-Service Training:

Observation and Participation
• Dagupan City National High School
• Judge Jose De Venecia Sr. Memorial National High School
• University of Pangasinan-Phinma Education Network, High School Department (University of Pangasinan High School)
• Bonuan Boquig National High School

Training and Seminars Attended:

Topic: “PAFTE 1: Towards Quality Assurance in Teacher Education”
Date: Febuary 28, 2011
Place: DMMMSU-SLUC, Agoo, La Union.

Topic: Teacher Education Update, Field study and Practice Teaching, and Preparation for the Licensure Examination for Teachers
Date: August 24, 2010
Place: Colegio de Dagupan Gymnasium, Dagupan City

Topic: Teaching Srategies in Mathematics and Physics
Date: December 5, 2009
Place: AS-201, University of Pangasinan, Dagupan City

Topic: Lectures-Seminar-Workshop in Number theory and Problem Solving Strategies
Date: March 19-20, 2009
Place: University of the Pangasinan Audio Visual Room, Dagupan City

Topic: Learning Assessment
Date: September 12, 2008
Place: Nursing Review Room in the University of Pangasinan

Personal Data:
Date of Birth : May 13, 1990
Civil Status : Single
Height : 5’5”
Weight : 110 lbs
Skills : Good Communication and Listening Skills, and
Proficient in MS Applications: MS word, MS excel, and
MS PowerPoint.

References:
xxxxxx
 
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Tdol

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I don't see the need for full-stops after the three items in the Awards Received section.
You use "Title" only in the first of the Topics of the seminars you have attended.
I wouldn't put spaces before the colons in the personal data section, ad would probably use tab to make the spacing even.

I wonder about maximising your university training- this suggests getting more out of it, while teaching suggests putting it to good use to me.
 
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