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    Post Please help me with this business email

    Dear Mrs/Sir,
    My name is .............and I distribute high quality wine.
    I would like to introduce to you our top selection of wines and I will be grateful if you spend few minutes to see my offer.
    In an attached file I知 sending you information about our most popular and successful wines in ........
    Some of them are appearing in the most exquisite hotels and restaurants.
    Through the years our winemakers have been awarded numerous medals from famous competitions such as Decanter, Wine Spectator and Chardonnay du Monde.
    If you are interested in our wines I will be very pleased to send to you samples.
    You are able to create your own sample list in the attached form which I知 sending to you.

    Kind Regards
    I hope it's not too bad

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    Re: Please help me with this business email

    Quote Originally Posted by Niki_t View Post
    Dear Mrs/Sir,
    My name is .............and I distributeam a distributor of high quality wine.
    I would like to introduce to you you to our top selection of wines and I willwould be grateful if you spend few minutes to see review my offer.
    In an attached file I知 sending you information about our most popular and successful wines in ........
    Some of them are appearingavailable in the most exquisite hotels and restaurants.
    Through the years our winemakers have been awarded numerous medals from famous competitions such as Decanter, Wine Spectator and Chardonnay du Monde.
    If you are interested in our wines I willwould be very pleased to send to you samples.
    You are able to can create your own sample list in using the attached form. which I知 sending to you.

    Kind Regards
    I hope it's not too bad
    Not bad. A few suggestions.

  2. Newbie
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    Re: Please help me with this business email

    Thank you!

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