tara
Member
- Joined
- Dec 3, 2006
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- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Japanese
- Home Country
- Japan
- Current Location
- Japan
Hello,
I'm often confused with a sentence that have commas in between.
I've rephrased one of the Catholic prayers "Act of Resignation", and I'd be grateful
if you would correct me my understanding.
Original:
My Lord God, even now I accept at Thy hands cheerfully and willingly, with all of its
anxieties, pains and sufferings. Whatever death it shall please Thee to be mine.
Reprased:
My Lord God, even I'm in a situation of facing with death, I'll be glad to accept your
intention and death no matter how it fills with lots of anxieties, pains and sufferings.
Thank you,
Tara
I'm often confused with a sentence that have commas in between.
I've rephrased one of the Catholic prayers "Act of Resignation", and I'd be grateful
if you would correct me my understanding.
Original:
My Lord God, even now I accept at Thy hands cheerfully and willingly, with all of its
anxieties, pains and sufferings. Whatever death it shall please Thee to be mine.
Reprased:
My Lord God, even I'm in a situation of facing with death, I'll be glad to accept your
intention and death no matter how it fills with lots of anxieties, pains and sufferings.
Thank you,
Tara