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    Rewording of clause

    If you have not exercised in a long while, or have a health condition do seek your doctor's advice and find out what are the activities you should avoid.

    Would it be better if the part in bold is reworded as "find out what activities you should avoid."?


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    Re: Rewording of clause

    Your version is shorter, but the other one is acceptable.

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