This post is too long for most of us to deal with. Please post small excerpts from it, particularly sections where you believe you have a specific problem with the language.
Shorter posts are always easier for us to read and we like to answer specific questions.
Please also use full words in your posts - your title should have started with the word "Please". We don't like textspeak (plz, pls, thx, u etc).
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