Here is my revision. Of course another person might have different ideas to mine but I hope this is helpful to you. :)
Local Public Transport
The purpose of this report is to describe the forms of public transport available in my area and also suggest how they could be improved.
There are not many kinds of public transport locally as I live in a little town close to the mountains. There are buses which carry some workers and students every day and a railway which is by far the fastest transport in my area.
The service on the buses and trains is not excellent. In fact I see a lot of disorganisation and the timetables are not always followed. Regarding cleanliness, the majority of citizens consider the trains to be quite messy and filthy, besides which fares are going up.
Nevertheless, our public transport has lower accident rates than the use of private cars. Indeed they prevent many deaths and injuries every year. Moreover, the use of trains reduces the emission of C02 and eases traffic jams.
To sum up, I would suggest greater use of public transport to save the environment.
Student or Learner