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It is supposed to be a text for the writing paper, part 1 of the First Certificate in English. I would be grateful if anyone could correct me the grammar and language mistakes. The topic of the exercise is " You're organising an adventure weekend holiday for a group of friends. Write a letter asking for information and details (if canoeing, food comprised, and clothes required in particular).
[FONT="]"Dear Sir or Madam,[/FONT]
[FONT="]I am writing to request further information about your Adventure Weekend Programme/Holiday, as my friends and I are really interested in participating; and clarification of the following details:[/FONT]
[FONT="]Firstly, we were wondering about the need of experience. We are a group of 5 friends, 3 female and 2 male, aged between 25 and 32 years, who cannot be really defined “sporty” since we all work in offices and just two of us practice some sport (go to run once a week). [/FONT]
[FONT="]Secondly, I wonder if you could tell me something more about the sporting activities we will take part in. Just the ones written or anything else, like canoeing for example?[/FONT]
[FONT="]In your advertisements it says that our prices include almost everything. Could you say me if the food is also comprised? [/FONT]
[FONT="]Finally, we need some extra information about the clothes we need to bring along with us. Which kind of shoes are required? We need for jacket or paints made of special material? I would appreciate a lot if you could suggest me a brand for the clothes.[/FONT]
[FONT="]We are feeling very enthusiastic about this programme, and look forward to your reply.[/FONT]
[FONT="]Yours faithfully[/FONT]
[FONT="]Rita Vitale"[/FONT]
[FONT="]"Dear Sir or Madam,[/FONT]
[FONT="]I am writing to request further information about your Adventure Weekend Programme/Holiday, as my friends and I are really interested in participating; and clarification of the following details:[/FONT]
[FONT="]Firstly, we were wondering about the need of experience. We are a group of 5 friends, 3 female and 2 male, aged between 25 and 32 years, who cannot be really defined “sporty” since we all work in offices and just two of us practice some sport (go to run once a week). [/FONT]
[FONT="]Secondly, I wonder if you could tell me something more about the sporting activities we will take part in. Just the ones written or anything else, like canoeing for example?[/FONT]
[FONT="]In your advertisements it says that our prices include almost everything. Could you say me if the food is also comprised? [/FONT]
[FONT="]Finally, we need some extra information about the clothes we need to bring along with us. Which kind of shoes are required? We need for jacket or paints made of special material? I would appreciate a lot if you could suggest me a brand for the clothes.[/FONT]
[FONT="]We are feeling very enthusiastic about this programme, and look forward to your reply.[/FONT]
[FONT="]Yours faithfully[/FONT]
[FONT="]Rita Vitale"[/FONT]