abdulaziz90
New member
- Joined
- Oct 25, 2011
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Arabic
- Home Country
- Saudi Arabia
- Current Location
- UK
Hi everyone,
I am going to send this Personal statement to university to study there and I would like to konw it is good to send it or it needs to improve.
could you help me to improve it
Personal statement
(I hope to accept me to study international foundation year in bolton university. First of all, my name is ..............., I am 21 years old. I finished my high school 4 years ago and I got 80% in total. After that, I studied in Saudi Accounting Bank for 2 years ,and the subject was insurance . I came in the United Kingdom since july I studied English since October in Oxford for 6 month after that I have been in Manchester for 7 month and I am studying in INTO Manchester until December and I have got 5 in IELTS.)
Many thanks
I am going to send this Personal statement to university to study there and I would like to konw it is good to send it or it needs to improve.
could you help me to improve it
Personal statement
(I hope to accept me to study international foundation year in bolton university. First of all, my name is ..............., I am 21 years old. I finished my high school 4 years ago and I got 80% in total. After that, I studied in Saudi Accounting Bank for 2 years ,and the subject was insurance . I came in the United Kingdom since july I studied English since October in Oxford for 6 month after that I have been in Manchester for 7 month and I am studying in INTO Manchester until December and I have got 5 in IELTS.)
Many thanks