I've changed and added some of the words that he/she used to not repeat the same word throught out his paragraph.Originally Posted by HaraKiriBlade
I’d like to talk about traditional Korean clothes because they are very delicate. Hanbok was a popular style that Koreans loved to wear a long time ago. Koreans nowaday, however, only wear traditional clothes on their special days because most of them are inconvenient for daily activities. So, a new style has been made called Sanghwalhanbok for those who are uncomfortable wearing Hanbok. There are many different styles of Korean clothing such as Dopo, Dang-ui ect... which all are gorgeous and simple. The special thing about Korean clothes is that their lines are very elegant and fine. Koreans, including myself, are proud of these beautiful clothes.
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