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    Is sentence correct

    Is the below sentence correct, if wrong please correct it and advise me which grammar that I want to refer

    "Could you please send me a extracted copy of all active major projects and client projects with their Start and End date and project managerís names from the tool? "

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    Re: Is sentence correct

    What is an "extracted copy"?
    Will the person understand what a "major" project is? Do you have a definition?
    What are the client projects? Aren't all your projects for clients?
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    Re: Is sentence correct

    1. the copy should be extracted from the tool. I am asking person to extract a copy from the tool
    2. there are two kind of projects, you may assume , type A and B

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    Re: Is sentence correct

    Quote Originally Posted by english_learn View Post
    Is the below sentence correct, if wrong please correct it and advise me which grammar that I want to refer

    "Could you please send me a extracted copy from the tool of all active, major projects and client projects with their Start and End dates and project managerís managers' names from the tool? "
    Corrections/suggestions.

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    #5

    Re: Is sentence correct

    "An" extracted copy

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    #6

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    And lower-case start and end dates.
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    Re: Is sentence correct

    Quote Originally Posted by SoothingDave View Post
    "An" extracted copy
    Yes, sorry, I overlooked that.

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    Thanks

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