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Code:Hi abc With reference to the below email, I applied as a Customer Service Technician at Abc 6 months back, I cleared all my test and interview but unfortunately I ddn’t attend my last interview with the hiring manager but I already informed you, the reason for writing this email is that I have seen a job posting at your site for the position of Customer service, can I apply for this job or not? Thanks
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Thanks for the reply,but how can i become more polite and use pronunciation, I have no idea.
I really apprecite if someone help me to improve the above mentioned letter because I have to submit it as soon as possible.
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