Suggestions.Please help me see if these sentences in my essay in understandable and appropriate. THANK YOU!
1. Meanwhile, observation in classrooms gave me the impression that students who used the largest number of grammatical forms, instead of the most appropriate ones, got more praise than others. OK
2. Your courses distinctively include diversity in (if I understand your statement, I think "among" would be better than "in") language learners as one of
its emphasestheir main features (or "focal points" or "strong points"), which is also my interest.
3. This rewarding experience solidified my desire to teach but also revealed to me how far my students
wereare from qualified English learners (what are "qualified English learners" ?).
Student or Learner