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  1. new2grammar's Avatar
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    #1

    please check the sentence

    A technology-driven company with highly motivated workforce - well qualified, skilled and experienced scientists and chemists is setting higher benchmarks for quality.

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    #2

    Re: please check the sentence

    A technology-driven company with highly motivated workforce - well qualified, skilled and experienced scientists and chemists is setting higher benchmarks for quality.

    Your sentence runs on. I would break it up for clarity.

    XXX
    is a technology-driven company with a highly motivated workforce. With well qualified, skilled and experienced scientists and chemists, XXX is working to set higher benchmarks for quality.

    John

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