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    Would You Check This Text For Me?

    Thank you in advance!

    A lot of people say that a dog is man's best friend, and I felt it this summer when I took a dog from my friend.
    I have been planing to buy a pet for a while. This summer, my friend offered me a puppy.
    I accepted the offer and brought her home.
    When I took her, she was quite small, two months old. My sister and I agreed to name her Tea.
    Since that day, I have been spening all my free time with my pet. Playing with her made me realise how much a man can connect with his dog,
    and what's the meaning of the phrase: "A dog is man's best friend".
    I brought togeather with her more and more as she was growing. Even when I wasn't at home for 10 days,
    she would always be happy when I back. Even though I slap her sometimes because she is not behaving well,
    she always come back to play with me. I've got a pet, but also great friend that will never betray me.

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    Re: Would You Check This Text For Me?

    Thank you very much!

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