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    please correct the sentence structure

    Well qualified & motivated quality assurance team & there training is a continuous process at Mehta API

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    Re: please correct the sentence structure

    I suggest that you make that two sentences. Perhaps:
    Training is a continuous process at Mehta API. A well qualified and motivated quality assurance team is in charge of that process there.
    Last edited by RonBee; 12-Dec-2011 at 20:32. Reason: punctuation (spacing)

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    Re: please correct the sentence structure

    Quote Originally Posted by RonBee View Post
    I suggest that you make that two sentences. Perhaps:
    Training is a continuous process at Mehta API. A well qualified and motivated quality assurance teamis in charge of that process there.
    can't we have simple and short line?

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    Re: please correct the sentence structure

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    can't we have simple and short line?
    The normal English expression when someone has tried to help you is 'Thank you'.

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    Re: please correct the sentence structure

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    can't we have simple and short line?
    You asked us to correct it, not to shorten it.

    I don't think you'll get all the relevant information in there by shortening it much. The best I could do would be:

    At Mehta API our well-qualified and motivated quality assurance team receive ongoing/regular training.

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