symaa
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- Dec 3, 2010
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- Arabic
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- Morocco
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Hello,
My question is about generalization in a paragraph or in an essay.
For example:
The bus is one of the most crowded places where you cannot even find a place to put your foot and sniff a fresh air.
Challenge is what makes you alive and ablaze with the excitement and the determination to fulfill your plans regardless of the constraints of life.
It is when you put your targets in front of you, when you are engrossed and obsessed with your beliefs.
My teacher underlined all the words which are in red, but I think that when we talk in general or about some topics, we cannot avoid generalization. So, if I write in that way, will my paragraph or essay be wrong?:-?
Would you please tell me what you think?
Regards,
My question is about generalization in a paragraph or in an essay.
For example:
The bus is one of the most crowded places where you cannot even find a place to put your foot and sniff a fresh air.
Challenge is what makes you alive and ablaze with the excitement and the determination to fulfill your plans regardless of the constraints of life.
It is when you put your targets in front of you, when you are engrossed and obsessed with your beliefs.
My teacher underlined all the words which are in red, but I think that when we talk in general or about some topics, we cannot avoid generalization. So, if I write in that way, will my paragraph or essay be wrong?:-?
Would you please tell me what you think?
Regards,
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