yanx
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Hi,
Which of the following structures is better, to reach, reaching, which structure or with structure? Why? If they are all correct, are there any subtle differences among them?
1 . The population count in this census topped 2,000,000 people, with a total count of 2,028,283. (the original sentence in an article on population statistics)
2. The population count in this census topped 2,000,000 people, reaching 2,028,283 in total. (I changed the latter part to 'reaching'..)
3. The population count in this census topped 2,000,000 people to reach 2,028,283.
(I changed the ending part)
4. The population count in this census topped 2,000,000 people,which came to 2,028,283. (the same goes for this.)
Thank you!
If you can explain in details I would highly appreciate it !
TY
Which of the following structures is better, to reach, reaching, which structure or with structure? Why? If they are all correct, are there any subtle differences among them?
1 . The population count in this census topped 2,000,000 people, with a total count of 2,028,283. (the original sentence in an article on population statistics)
2. The population count in this census topped 2,000,000 people, reaching 2,028,283 in total. (I changed the latter part to 'reaching'..)
3. The population count in this census topped 2,000,000 people to reach 2,028,283.
(I changed the ending part)
4. The population count in this census topped 2,000,000 people,which came to 2,028,283. (the same goes for this.)
Thank you!
If you can explain in details I would highly appreciate it !
TY