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    #1

    good paragraph

    i need your help with a good paragraph and with out any fragment, run-on, subject agreement and verb tense.

    do i need a conclusion for this kind of paragraph?

    you can add or change anything you want.

    The happiest moment of my life is when I got married. I will always remember the “white day,” which is the day that I got married. I have spent ten years with my beautiful wife. When I got married I felt that I should not have waited so long. I asked myself why I did not get married earlier. Everyone should get married early.

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    #2

    Re: good paragraph

    Duplicate post.

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    #3

    Re: good paragraph

    mohd11, you started three identical threads, and tacked this question onto a fourth.

    Please post a question once only. I have deleted your other threads/posts, as multiple posting causes confusion - and clutters up the forum.

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