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  1. Newbie
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      • Afrikaans
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      • South Africa
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    • Join Date: Dec 2011
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    #1

    Please help!

    Can I improve on this from a grammar point of view? If so, what should I change?
    International company expanding, need people wanting to earn extra income part-time, without affecting what they are currently doing.

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      • British English
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      • England
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      • Ireland

    • Join Date: Apr 2008
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    #2

    Re: Please help!

    Quote Originally Posted by InaMarais View Post
    Can I improve on this from a grammar point of view? If so, what should I change?
    International company expanding, need people wanting to earn extra income part-time, without affecting what they are currently doing.
    "An expanding international company needs people who want to earn extra income on a part-time basis, without affecting their current employment."

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