See above for my suggestions.Hi Teachers,
Could you correct this story that I rewrote please? Is there a way to include the words 'bride' and 'groom' in this story? If there is, I'll appreciate very much if you could use those words inside the story.
Tom and Susan got married yesterday morning. They had the (or their) wedding
partyreception yesterday afternoon with a lotlots of friends. Susan’s parents were there and so were Tom’s.The bride's and the groom's parents were there. Almost everybody drank champagne, ate cake, and had a good time. Only Tom’s mother did not eat or drink very much because she became very emotional at the wedding partyreception. Susan’s father madegave a terrific speech.
Thanks in advance