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    Cool too many ins


    Can somoene give some suggestions to make this phrase more stylish?

    "It's a plant located in Salvador in the state of Bahia in Northern Brazil".

    Three times in 's is ugly, isn't it?

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    Re: too many ins

    Not necessarily.

    You could say, "It's a plant located in Salvador, in the Northern Brazilian state of Bahia".

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