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    #1

    revise sentences

    clarifies the strongest correlation that exists to future success is family income. This should come as no surprise. Children who grow up in more affluent or highly educated families enjoy advantages that begin at birth with a more intellectually stimulating environment. They go on to attend better schools, enjoy more cultural opportunities and travel more widely. Their parents also have the educational background and resources to help them along the way and to expose them to a culture of high expectations and high achievement.

    Can you help me revise this sentences?

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    #2

    Re: revise sentences

    not a teacher

    The first sentence is incomplete.

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