I have been asked by the university to give them reasons why I am applying to their university, so this is my answer and I want help to edit it. Thank you for editing/correcting my letter.
Firstly, no one can deny that Norway is one of the leaders in the fields of marine technology, science and industry in the world and Norwegian Science and Technology University (NTNU) are the pioneer in this field and have the highest standard and quality(of?). The other fact is that the comprehensiveness of NTNU's marine department research programs has fascinated me. NTNU's marine master program covers all fields of study including Marine Structures, Marine systems, Nautical Science and other related majors. Therefore, it will give me the opportunity to do research into a wide variety of marine fields. Last but not the least, your extremely distinguished faculty and professors that I heard a lot about will help me gain more knowledge.
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