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I am new to this website and hope you can help me with my short story.
I have some grammer mistakes and not sure about using the appropriate words. Could you please give me some advise on which word is more convinient.. Thanks.
My uncle had a big ram which attacks anything that moves.In the morning When the sheperd of our villiage
opens the door of the stable, everyone hides himself/themselves.
The sheperd brings the flock back at sunset.One day I was playing somewhere near
the villiage forgetting about the flock's returning time. It was too late before I noticed
the angry ram. I wanted to run away from my location but the ram got me and bumped me and
I fell to the ground and rolled. As soon as I stood up ,the ram hit me again I fell under the ram
I managed to hold its horn. Now the ram could hardly move. I stayed that way for 4 or five minutes
until my father and uncle arrived and saved me.
Last edited by wisdomx; 14-Jan-2012 at 15:53.