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    #1

    Is it right to say?

    Soon, "Bally" in "PASSAGE" store!

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    #2

    Re: Is it right to say?

    Quote Originally Posted by Tatev Avagyan View Post
    Soon, "Bally" in "PASSAGE" store!
    I'm afraid that makes no sense at all to me.

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    #3

    Re: Is it right to say?

    Please give the context in which you want to use this apparently random sequence of unconnected words.

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    #4

    Re: Is it right to say?

    We want to have an announcement, the content of which is the following:
    We 'll soon represent "BALLY" (brand) in "Passage" store

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    #5

    Re: Is it right to say?

    plzzzzz answer, it is very important. Thx in advance

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    #6

    Re: Is it right to say?

    Bally will soon be available/on sale in Passage.

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    #7

    Re: Is it right to say?

    Thanks a lot! Are there any versions which can be correct to express the same idea?

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    #8

    Re: Is it right to say?

    Quote Originally Posted by Tatev Avagyan View Post
    plzzzzz answer, it is very important. Thx in advance
    Please don't get impatient a mere half an hour after the last response. The people who answer your questions are volunteers, working in what little free time they have.

    As this is forum for pepole interested in correct English, please avoid chatlish - plzzzzz Please, Thx Thanks.

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    #9

    Re: Is it right to say?

    Quote Originally Posted by Tatev Avagyan View Post
    Thanks a lot! Are there any versions which can be correct to express the same idea?
    [not a teacher]

    Are you asking if there are multiple ways of saying the same thing? or
    Did you mean to question if their suggestion was the only correct way to say it?

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    #10

    Re: Is it right to say?

    While I usually try not to use "always" or "never" when describing English, I feel safe saying there are always multiples ways to express the same thought.

    Passage is excited to announce that it will soon carry the Bally line of products!
    Coming soon to Passage: The Bally line!

    Or the one you got a few posts above this one.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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