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    #1

    WOULD YOU HELP ME PLEASE?

    Hello,
    Would you please help me with the following sentences?

    1/The removal of the product from the market
    2 the product flowed from the bottle and a white film was formed
    Are the above sentences correct?

    3/We have to check the conformity of this batch.
    Is it right to use ''conformity'' without using ''with something''?

    4/ Is it correct to use ''valuer's report'' as a meaning of the report of an assessment?

    Thank you in advance

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    #2

    Re: WOULD YOU HELP ME PLEASE?

    1/The removal of the product from the market
    2 the product flowed from the bottle and a white film was formed
    Are the above sentences correct?
    The first is not a sentence- it's incomplete. The second is OK, though I would delete was. Product sounds strange- what was it?

    3/We have to check the conformity of this batch.
    Is it right to use ''conformity'' without using ''with something''?
    This doesn't work for me without more context.

    4/ Is it correct to use ''valuer's report'' as a meaning of the report of an assessment?
    What sort of assessment? The term exists when people asses the value of a company, property, etc.

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    #3

    Re: WOULD YOU HELP ME PLEASE?

    Quote:
    1/The removal of the product from the market
    2 the product flowed from the bottle and a white film was formed
    Are the above sentences correct?
    The first is not a sentence- it's incomplete. The second is OK, though I would delete was. Product sounds strange- what was it?

    1/You are alright, the first sentence is incomplete. In fact, I have changed the word removal by withdrawal and what I need to know if it is correct to use it to express the fact of removing a product from a market because it is no longer valid.
    2/If I delete 'was' I'll have ''a white film formed'' which doesn't make any sense for me, I'm using it on the passive form.
    The product refers to the liquid which is in the bottle.


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    3/We have to check the conformity of this batch.
    Is it right to use ''conformity'' without using ''with something''?
    This doesn't work for me without more context.

    3/In fact, someones say, according to their analyses, that the product is defective. Others decide to make a second assessment to check the conformity of this batch (the validity of their analysis). By the way is there any other word to use to express second assessment?

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    4/ Is it correct to use ''valuer's report'' as a meaning of the report of an assessment?
    What sort of assessment? The term exists when people asses the value of a company, property, etc.

    4/ The assessment I meant is related to the explanation made above and how to call a report of such assessment?


    5/ Allow me to ask you for something else:
    - is it right to use ''allow me to...'' like on request above or like in the following sentece (allow me to insist on this point)
    - is it right to say to do analysis of the samples of the concerned batch or to say to do analysis on samples of the concerned batch ?



    Another again tnank you very much for your reply

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    #4

    Re: WOULD YOU HELP ME PLEASE?

    Quote Originally Posted by loufa View Post
    2/If I delete 'was' I'll have ''a white film formed'' which doesn't make any sense for me, I'm using it on the passive form.
    Why use the passive form? Who formed the white film? There's no need to use the passive.

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