I would like to send a letter to a US University.
Could you check it for mistakes?
Thank you in advance.
Dear Dr. ,
Thank you very much for your interest. (I'm not sure I understand this statement,especially if you are making application. Did the university contact you indicating an "interest" in you attending?)
I would like to inform you that I made formal application to the Graduate School of the University of Tennessee on December 14, 2011.
I am aware of the significance of my TOEFL score for the Graduate School and for the College of Nursing.
If it could help, the TOEFL program informed me yesterday via E-mail that my TOEFL iBT™ scores have
startedbegun to be available online. I have not managed yet to connect with ETS server because of the exams takers’ high demand for online results. I am still trying to connect with the ETS server in order to haveobtain my scores. Once I have them, I will send them promptly to you.
Apart from the online scores, I hope that you will receive the official scores soon in order
to act as neededfor you to consider my application. I am hopeful for a favorable decision with regard to my request for enrollment.
Thank you again.
Student or Learner