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This is an IELTS writing article. Could you please correct my English? Thank you in advance!
Topic
Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. Do you agree or disagree.
Essay:
Some feminists go to the extremely to say that universities should accept same percentage of male and female in all the subjects. It seemingly reveals this policy will guard the fight of females, but in fact, it is not a reasonable suggestion.
Female and male have natural difference. Women are more talented in language and are more conscientious than male. So in the classes of language learning and nursing, you will find the girls’ number is far more than boys’. In the other hand men is more sensitive in math, they are more suitable to learn subjects like accounting. If the schools carry on the policy that number of male and female students should be equal, some girls will not be able to enter their favorite subject for they should make room for male students. What is more, some girls have to learn math and science which they may not good at it.
In my opinion, universities could limit the total number of a subject for the teaching resource is finite but the percentage of gender should not be a standard for enroll students. Universities just need to compile some different demands which could measure whether a student has enough ability to learn the courses. No matter men or women as long as they could satisfy the requirements of the subjects, they could choose to learn it.
In conclusion, the claim that every subject should accept equal numbers of male and female students is not a logical proposal, rather than protect girls’ right, it will disrupt the order of education.
Topic
Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. Do you agree or disagree.
Essay:
Some feminists go to the extremely to say that universities should accept same percentage of male and female in all the subjects. It seemingly reveals this policy will guard the fight of females, but in fact, it is not a reasonable suggestion.
Female and male have natural difference. Women are more talented in language and are more conscientious than male. So in the classes of language learning and nursing, you will find the girls’ number is far more than boys’. In the other hand men is more sensitive in math, they are more suitable to learn subjects like accounting. If the schools carry on the policy that number of male and female students should be equal, some girls will not be able to enter their favorite subject for they should make room for male students. What is more, some girls have to learn math and science which they may not good at it.
In my opinion, universities could limit the total number of a subject for the teaching resource is finite but the percentage of gender should not be a standard for enroll students. Universities just need to compile some different demands which could measure whether a student has enough ability to learn the courses. No matter men or women as long as they could satisfy the requirements of the subjects, they could choose to learn it.
In conclusion, the claim that every subject should accept equal numbers of male and female students is not a logical proposal, rather than protect girls’ right, it will disrupt the order of education.