suprunp
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- Apr 27, 2011
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- Ukrainian
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- Ukraine
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1) The sun was hiding behind the building and our garden was seized by the shadow bit by bit until it got completely dark.
2) The sun was hiding behind the building as if trying to flee from the moon that had just appeared on the east horizon.
(My own piece of writing)
Would you understand 'the sun was hiding' in 1) as a gradual process and 'the sun was hiding' in 2) as if the sun was already there, in other words, the sun was hidden behind the building (my apologies, but I seem to be unable to label it).
I'll try to paraphrase the sentences to try to be more clear about what I want to convey.
1) The sun was disappearing gradually behind the building and our garden was seized by the shadow bit by bit until it got completely dark.
2) The sun was hidden behind the building as if someone mighty enough had put it there trying to conceal its presence from the moon.
Thanks.
2) The sun was hiding behind the building as if trying to flee from the moon that had just appeared on the east horizon.
(My own piece of writing)
Would you understand 'the sun was hiding' in 1) as a gradual process and 'the sun was hiding' in 2) as if the sun was already there, in other words, the sun was hidden behind the building (my apologies, but I seem to be unable to label it).
I'll try to paraphrase the sentences to try to be more clear about what I want to convey.
1) The sun was disappearing gradually behind the building and our garden was seized by the shadow bit by bit until it got completely dark.
2) The sun was hidden behind the building as if someone mighty enough had put it there trying to conceal its presence from the moon.
Thanks.