I am submitting this paragraph response for a conference scholarship application. Can someone help me proofread my writing? Thank you very much!!

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Why do you want to attend AIDS 2012?*
(maximum 200 words)

> The IAS conference is one of the biggest annual international conference which gathers world-renowned HIV researchers. Through attending this conference, I wish to meet fellow HIV researchers and get to understand their current research. Since the scope of the IAS conference includes all basic, clinical and social sciences and much more, I also consider attending your conference a great opportunity to learn about developments in other HIV-related fields that I do not specialize in. Overall, I believe your conference will offer a great educational and networking opportunity for students like me.