snoopy5376
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I'm doing a question on note expansion. I'm supposed to expand the following note:
- dog - barking - smoke - door
I am facing problem describing the smoke. These are my sentences. Are they correct?
Or are there any better word?
Thanks in advance. :-D
- dog - barking - smoke - door
I am facing problem describing the smoke. These are my sentences. Are they correct?
- John heard a dog barking while he was doing his homework one night. He looked up and saw smoke coming through the door.
- John heard a dog barking while he was doing his homework one night. He looked up and saw smoke drifting through the door.
- John heard a dog barking while he was doing his homework one night. He looked up and saw smoke beyond the door.
Or are there any better word?
Thanks in advance. :-D