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    Please, proofread a few lines of text

    Hello.

    My written English is at upper intermediate level as the result of having more than 4 years experience communicating with foreign colleagues in writing.

    What do you think of that? Can you see any grammatical mistakes (the highlighted part bothers me the most) ?
    If you would suggest your refinement of the text I would be more than happy.

    Thanks, Alex.

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    Re: Please, proofread a few lines of text

    Quote Originally Posted by AlexAD View Post
    Hello.

    My written English is at upper intermediate level as the result of having more than 4 years experience communicating with foreign colleagues in writing.

    What do you think of that? Can you see any grammatical mistakes (the highlighted part bothers me the most) ?
    If you would suggest your refinement of the text I would be more than happy.

    Thanks, Alex.
    I would use "as a result" rather than "as the result", otherwise it's fine.

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