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    Unhappy paragraph .. helppp!

    i need help on writing a paragraph. it says "think about a time when you first saw or experienced something new or describe "the time i was scared to death" " and write a paragraph describing how you felt and the things going around you.

    i can not think of any topic sentences. and it includes see, hear, smell, taste, and touch. i seriously need help ...

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    Re: paragraph .. helppp!

    Quote Originally Posted by ccrriissttiinnaa View Post
    Hello. I need help on with writing a paragraph. It says is called "Think about a time when you first saw or experienced something new or describe "the time i was scared to death" " and write a paragraph describing how you felt and the things going around you.

    I can not cannot think of any a topic. sentences. and It should includes the verbs "see, hear, smell, taste, and touch". I seriously need help.
    Hello, and welcome to the forum.

    Before we continue, please look at the amendments I have made to your post, marked in red. The first thing to remember when posting here is to use correct forms of written English, so:

    - Start every new sentence with a capital letter.
    - Always capitalise the word "I" (first person singular).
    - Only one full stop is required at the end of a sentence
    - In your title, "help" is spelt with just one "p".

    Now - your question. If you are learning English, then you will need to become accustomed to using your imagination as you will probably be asked to write a lot of short paragraphs or essays like this one. Can you really not think of one experience in your entire life when you did something for the first time? The first time you went to the cinema? The first time you went to a food market? The first time you swam in the sea? Those are some ideas, but now please come up with your own ideas. We don't write your essays for you here.

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