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    Need advice on fine-tuning a sentence, thanks sooo much teachers!

    Does the following sentence need any fine-tuning? Thanks soooo much, teachers.


    Vivian quickly went to the reception desk to get help from the janitors. One of them told the headmasters, one came to comfort me, and another of them dialled the emergency number.

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    Re: Need advice on fine-tuning a sentence, thanks sooo much teachers!

    It's OK, but should 'headmasters' be plural?

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    Re: Need advice on fine-tuning a sentence, thanks sooo much teachers!

    Thanks sooo much for advising, teacher Tdol! You're a legend.

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    Re: Need advice on fine-tuning a sentence, thanks sooo much teachers!

    You're always welcome.

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