Ashiuhto
Senior Member
- Joined
- Nov 30, 2010
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- Taiwan
- Current Location
- Taiwan
Please check the following paragraph.
I hated taking a trip to Taipei. There are too many people in Taipei, and that causes air pollution. Also, the price of goods is more expensive than the other places in Taiwan. Besides, it is full of mansions that I don’t like. I like countryside and its quiet rural life more than crowded city . In addition to air pollution, its public security is corruptive. The city maybe has a lot of benefits, but it also has a lot of defects.
I hated taking a trip to Taipei. There are too many people in Taipei, and that causes air pollution. Also, the price of goods is more expensive than the other places in Taiwan. Besides, it is full of mansions that I don’t like. I like countryside and its quiet rural life more than crowded city . In addition to air pollution, its public security is corruptive. The city maybe has a lot of benefits, but it also has a lot of defects.