Please make my sentence sound better

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TheShadow

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Hi,

"It is not worth to come all the way for half day, Just the travelling will take half a day. "


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"It is not worth [STRIKE]to come[/STRIKE] coming all the way for half a day,; [STRIKE]J[/STRIKE]just the travelling will take half a day. "[/QUOTE] Instead of 'just the travelling, you could say 'the travelling/ journey alone'.
 
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