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    a stence and a phrase

    "With the development of our capitalist economy, the income gap is widening"

    Q1. Is the sentence acceptable or it is better to rewrite it as, As our capitalist economy is developing, the income gap is widening?

    Training services for the middle-aged, who are the most underprivileged in labour market, should be especially especially taken care

    Q2 Is there any better expression to substitute the phrase "take care"

    Thanks for any advice!

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    Re: a stence and a phrase

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    Q1 --- Yes, it's fine as written, as is the alternative sentence you've suggested. Personally, I would write it like this:
    "As our capitalist economy grows, so does the gap between rich and poor." (You could simply use 'income gap' as well)
    Q2 --- Here's how I would write it:
    "Special care should be taken for the training of the middle-aged, who are the most underprivileged in the labor market."

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    Re: a stence and a phrase

    (Note that SlickVic9000 has kindly assumed for the OP a context for 'take care' that seems to fit the area under discussion. But 'take care' can mean many different things. It could, for example, mean 'proceed with circumspection' or it could mean 'kill' or... )

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    Re: a stence and a phrase

    Quote Originally Posted by BobK View Post
    (Note that SlickVic9000 has kindly assumed for the OP a context for 'take care' that seems to fit the area under discussion. But 'take care' can mean many different things. It could, for example, mean 'proceed with circumspection' or it could mean 'kill' or... )

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    Yes, we should make sure that the middle-aged unemployed are "taken care of".

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    Re: a stence and a phrase

    So the sentence should be write as follow to convey a precise meaning right?

    "Training services for the middle-aged, who are the most underprivileged in labour market, should be especially taken care of"

    Thanks so much

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