I apply for voluntary to Germany. I`d really love someone to check over my CV. :]

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Europass Curriculum Vitae

Personal information

First name(s) / Surname(s)

Marjanne Priidik

Address

(Estonia)

Mobile

+372 54 610 027

Fax(es)

-

Nationality

Estonian

Date of birth

02 May 1993

Gender

Female

Desired employment / Occupational field

Youth leisure

Work experience

Dates

06/06/2010 - 19/07/2010

Occupation or position held

Valet

Main activities and responsibilities

Name and address of employer

Type of business or sector

Dates

22/06/2011 - 24/08/2011

Occupation or position held

Valet

Dates

07 September 2011 - 14 October 2011

Occupation or position held

Child-care worker

Main activities and responsibilities

I dealed with babysitting. I took care for my neighbor`s 2-years old child. I have also looked after my 3-years old niece named Eleri and after my younger brother. Even now I frequently haunt my niece and sometimes I look after her at the weekends.

Education and training

Dates

1 Sep 00 - 7 May 03

Title of qualification awarded

Massiaru Primary school

Principal subjects / occupational skills covered

Grades 1 to 3.

Dates

02/09/2003 - 16/06/2009

Title of qualification awarded

Uulu Basic School

Principal subjects / occupational skills covered

Basic education (grades 4 to 9)

Dates

31/08/2009 - 22/06/2012

Title of qualification awarded

Pärnu Hansa Gymnasium

Principal subjects / occupational skills covered

Secondary Education (classes 10 to 12), media and humanitarian direction.

Personal skills and competences

Mother tongue(s)

Estonian

Other language(s)

Self-assessment

Understanding

Speaking

W r i t i n g

European level (*)

Listening

Reading

Spoken interaction

Spoken production

German

A2

Basic User

A2

Basic User

A2

Basic User

-

-

A2

Basic User

English

C1

Proficient user

B2

Independent user

C1

Proficient user

-

-

B2

Independent user

Russian

A1

Basic User

A2

Basic User

A1

Basic User

-

-

A1

Basic User

(*) Common European Framework of Reference (CEF) level

Social skills and competences

I`m smiling when greeting people and meeting and I often show my interest in others - for exaple asking how their day was. I always notice other people`s feeling and I`m generally cheerful, supportive, friendly and very active young.

Organisational skills and competences

I actively participate in different events and projects offered by our local youth reality named T.A.N.K.

Computer skills and competences

Microsoft Exel, Scratch, Graphics, Internet use, MS Word, File management, Keyboard skills

Artistic skills and competences

I have taken part in some projects related to my home region youth center T.A.N.K. For example I attended to in making film about how to victual healthfully.

Other skills and competences

My hobbies are especially taking photographs, drawing, meeting friends and examining other cultures. Futhermore I enjoy listening music and I also like different kinds of sports like cycling, running, swimming and playing basketball and volleyball.

Additional information

I am an independent, creative, open-minded, flexible person who take the responsibilities.Futhermore, I like travelling a lot, because for me other cultures and countries are very interesting. Espacially German culture and I would really love to practice my German.

Annexes

One volunteer from Austria inspired me more than I had been before. She stayed in my village for 6 months and she acquainted for us Austrian traditions which are quite similar to German`s. Moreover I got inspired by my German lessons - these made me seriously wonder about Gemany and its culture.

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The formatting has made this almost impossible to deal with. Can you please just post the parts that have full paragraphs by typing in the information again? I realise that's more work for you, but the way the text has come out in your original post has just made it too difficult to edit. Thanks.

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Okey. It seems to be really impossible to read. -.-
Ok, I post the parts that have full paragraphs. :)

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Occupation or position held	Child-care worker
Main activities and responsibilities	I dealed with babysitting. I took care for my neighbor`s 2-years old child. I have also looked after my 3-years old niece named Eleri and after my younger brother. Even now I frequently haunt my niece and sometimes I look after her at the weekends.
	Dates 1 Sep 00 - 7 May 03 Title of qualification awarded Massiaru Primary school Principal subjects / occupational skills covered Grades 1 to 3. Dates 02/09/2003 - 16/06/2009 Title of qualification awarded Uulu Basic School Principal subjects / occupational skills covered Basic education (grades 4 to 9) Dates 31/08/2009 - 22/06/2012 Title of qualification awarded Pärnu Hansa Gymnasium Principal subjects / occupational skills covered Secondary Education (classes 10 to 12), media and humanitarian direction.

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Social skills and competences	I`m smiling when greeting people and meeting and I often show my interest in others - for exaple asking how their day was. I always notice other people`s feeling and I`m generally cheerful, supportive, friendly and very active young.
Organisational skills and competences	I actively participate in different events and projects offered by our local youth reality named T.A.N.K.
Computer skills and competences	Microsoft Exel, Scratch, Graphics, Internet use, MS Word, File management, Keyboard skills
Artistic skills and competences	I have taken part in some projects related to my home region youth center T.A.N.K. For example I attended to in making film about how to victual healthfully.
Other skills and competences	My hobbies are especially taking photographs, drawing, meeting friends and examining other cultures. Futhermore I enjoy listening music and I also like different kinds of sports like cycling, running, swimming and playing basketball and volleyball.
Additional information	I am an independent, creative, open-minded, flexible person who take the responsibilities.Futhermore, I like travelling a lot, because for me other cultures and countries are very interesting. Espacially German culture and I would really love to practice my German.
Annexes	One volunteer from Austria inspired me more than I had been before. She stayed in my village for 6 months and she acquainted for us Austrian traditions which are quite similar to German`s. Moreover I got inspired by my German lessons - these made me seriously wonder about Gemany and its culture.

Thanks for reading. :))

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Occupation or position held	Child-care worker
Main activities and responsibilities	I dealed with babysitting. I have babysat a lot. I took care for of my neighbor`s 2-years old two-year-old child. I have also looked after my 3-years old three-year-old niece named Eleri and after my younger brother. Even now I frequently haunt!!! (have you looked up "to haunt" in the dictionary. Are you a ghost?) my niece and sometimes I look after her at the weekends.
	Dates 1 Sep 00 - 7 May 03 Title of qualification awarded Massiaru Primary school Principal subjects / occupational skills covered Grades 1 to 3. Dates 02/09/2003 - 16/06/2009 Title of qualification awarded Uulu Basic School Principal subjects / occupational skills covered Basic education (grades 4 to 9) Dates 31/08/2009 - 22/06/2012 Title of qualification awarded Pärnu Hansa Gymnasium Principal subjects / occupational skills covered Secondary Education (classes 10 to 12), media and humanitarian direction.

See above. You definitely need to check on "to haunt". I have no idea what you meant but "haunt" is certainly not the right word.

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Social skills and competencies	I`m smiling I always smile when greeting people and meeting when I meet people and I often show my interest in others - for example asking how their day was. I always notice other people`s feeling and I`m generally cheerful, supportive, friendly and very active. young.
Organisational skills and competencies	I actively participate in different events and projects offered by our local youth reality group, named T.A.N.K.
Computer skills and competencies	Microsoft Excel, Scratch, Graphics, Internet use, MS Word, File management, Keyboard skills
Artistic skills and competencies	I have taken part in some projects related to my home region youth center T.A.N.K. For example, I attended to in making a film about how to victual healthfully I don't know what you mean here. What do you mean by "victual"? And "healthfully" is not a word. Please try this part of the sentence again.
Other skills and competencies	My hobbies are especially taking photographs, drawing, meeting friends and examining studying other cultures. Furthermore I enjoy listening to music and I also like different kinds of sports like cycling, running, swimming and playing basketball and volleyball.
Additional information	I am an independent, creative, open-minded, flexible person who take the responsibilities and I take my responsibilities very seriously. Furthermore, I like travelling a lot, because for me other cultures and countries are very interesting, especially German culture, and I would really love to practice my German.
Annexes	One volunteer from Austria inspired me more than I had been inspired before. She stayed in my village for 6 months and she acquainted for us taught us about Austrian traditions which are quite similar to German's traditions. Moreover I got I am also inspired by my German lessons - these made make me seriously wonder curious about Gemany and its culture.

Thanks for reading. :))

See above. I have made some more amendments. I am wondering why you are having to complete this application in English if it's for a German volunteer program. You say in the application that you want to study and practice your German. It would have made more sense if the application form was in German.

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I dealed with babysitting

.

I have babysat a lot

. I took care

for

of

my neighbor`s

2-years old

two-year-old

child. I have also looked after my

3-years old

three-year-old

niece

named Eleri

and

after

my younger brother. Even now I frequently

haunt!!! (have you looked up "to haunt" in the dictionary. Are you a ghost?)

my niece and sometimes I look after her at the weekends.

Heehe, sorry. I made a big mistake. XD I`m embarrassed. I don`t know what I wanted to say.
I made so :

Even now I sometimes look after her at the weekends.

See above. I have made some more amendments. I am wondering why you are having to complete this application in English if it's for a German volunteer program. You say in the application that you want to study and practice your German. It would have made more sense if the application form was in German.

I also want to practise me English too, bcz without practice of my language I couln`t cope with university. :/

But thank U so much for the help. :]