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    please help to edit this sentences

    Concerning invoice for subscription , we prepare demand note for subscription fee instead of invoice and we have been trying to attach it in your email address ,unfortunately email return to us , can we use this address (21688 DSM) to post your demand note?

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    Re: please help to edit this sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by chiko View Post
    Concerning [the|an] invoice for [the|your] subscriptionno space, we have prepared [a|the] demand note for the subscription fee instead of an invoice and we have been trying to attached it to an email in your email to your addressno space, spacebut unfortunately the email was returned to us. , Can we use this address (21688 DSM) to post your demand note?
    [AmE - not a teacher]

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