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    the right path

    Are the following sentences acceptable?

    1. She often says that we are a big family, and all of us are her sons and daughters.
    2. She treats us as her own child.
    3. She shows students the right path under all circumstances and never shies away from her duties.
    4. In fact, she is always there by the studentís side at the times of need.

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    Re: the right path

    Quote Originally Posted by Ashiuhto View Post
    Are the following sentences acceptable?

    1. She often says that we are a big family, and all of us we are like sons and daughters to her.
    2. She treats us as like her own child
    ren
    3. She shows students the right path under all circumstancesis always there for her students and never shies away from her duties.
    4. In fact, she is always there by the her students' side in the time of need.
    I've amended sentence n.2 considerably as to me it sounded a little bit biblical.
    Hope it helps.

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    Re: the right path

    Quote Originally Posted by Ashiuhto View Post

    4. In fact, she is always there by the
    her students' side at their times of need.
    See above.

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